Our world forgets – has never known, perhaps –
that questions are a treasured magic wand:
the question asked, the answer may, most like, come freshly said
out of a space that’s new alike to teacher and to taught;
your question is today – how factual should I leave
my verse, or should I seek to ‘colour’ it with metaphor? …
this image comes to mind: ‘old master’ in his studio,
famed painter of Madonnas with attendant Child;
demand’s incessant; so he draws the outlines in,
and passes on the canvas to his studio hand;
coloured then, maybe he adds the master’s touch of life -–
the smile of angel’s sweetness on the Madonna’s face;
the glimpse of future in the Christ Child’s eyes;
and off it goes to some great patron’s church,
to comfort all of womanhood in woes and joys,
its colours gleaming candlelit in sacred prayer;
and yet, how connoisseurs may treasure that quick sketch
on scrap of hand-made paper, where the very touch
of sanguine chalk or silverpoint, reveal the immediate mind
of that old master, as it found the new track of the line;
the world will praise, admire, your coloured image of Her face;
but She will see, in pencilled sketch, how love springs from her grace..
Yes Yes Yes. It is the first flush of new growth that touches the soul... when art comes from that place. I get it Michael! Impeccably written too. love Allie xxxxxxxxx
A sketch of a poem, best one I've seen you scribble! Love from David, Love David, 'Love'.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Michael, an interesting question and beautifully expressed. Perhaps the answer is that each is a valid work of art. For me, the leaner the better! Best wishes, Martin