sarwar chowdhury

Rookie - 14 Points (Origin- Bangladesh, Living abroad.)

A Ray, The Rays - Poem by sarwar chowdhury

Rays of false hope
captures people's attention
Some are able to cope
with, some are in tension!


Comments about A Ray, The Rays by sarwar chowdhury

  • (3/25/2010 2:13:00 PM)


    Sure and certain….and blatant…
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK
    PS 10
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  • (9/15/2009 11:02:00 AM)


    So often found.
    Prudent persons even become prey.
    Nice
    Ten [ goofed vote box why? ]
    dr. sakti
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  • Miriam Maia Padua (6/20/2009 8:32:00 PM)


    very meaningful...full of truth
    food for the mind...appealing
    10++++
    ...looking forward to your new poems again, my friend
    more power...more writes from you..

    lovelots,
    maia
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  • (12/24/2008 6:00:00 AM)


    well said Sarwar, meaningful. its best to face the truth and move on...

    Happy NEW YEAR

    Mamta
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  • Raihana Abdul Jabbar (10/13/2008 1:43:00 PM)


    You have proved yourself with these meaningful lines....You are indeed an exceptional poet.... (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (9/6/2008 2:47:00 PM)


    A nice short poem with a deep appeal. So I am bound to give my 10. Fatafati hochdhe! (Report) Reply

  • (8/22/2008 1:51:00 PM)


    Hi Sarwar Chowdhury,
    Khub bhalo kabita. Try to write more.
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  • (8/21/2008 5:19:00 AM)


    yes u put me in tension and I dont know how to cope
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    love anjali
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  • (7/17/2008 9:56:00 AM)


    although it is very short it is full of wisdom, i loved it (Report) Reply

  • (7/12/2008 12:32:00 AM)


    In such simple formation conveys a deeper message! I like it (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 1:41:00 AM)


    Rays of false hope - well said, well penned in few words. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 26, 2008



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