A Rootless Existence Poem by Dr Kamran Haider Bukhari

A Rootless Existence

Rating: 4.6


Severed from self
It is just
A selfless existence
Of this body
Made up of mere clay

Nomadic thoughts
Your mind loves to create
Untrodden paths
Your feet tend to walk
Unknown words
Your tongue slips to pronounce
Speak with care
You are not allowed
To say
What has not been told to you
Yet

My Love should be fearless
Then
Why all the time I have worries
Of my poor self
My pocket is crying for
The chocolates
My daughter loves to eat
My wife is building a new home
On the graveyard of my old dreams
My shoes have grown a little older too
Like the sadness in my mother’s eyes
I can replace my middle-aged lusterless shoes
With the young ones having a pristine shine
But what should I do
To rejuvenate the marks of happiness
In my mother’s lifeless eyes
And
In my life’s soulless existence

This life is nothing
But a wakeful dream
I was predisposed to live
Then
Why am I rebellious
To my default operating system
I keep on customizing
My intrinsic programming
With an artificial intelligence
Errors and bloopers
And what I get in the end
Is nothing but
A rootless existence


Nov 29,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with profoundity.Wonderfully written! 10/10

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Aijaz Asif 04 December 2008

uff bhai what a write....the first stanza its amazingly beautiful and strong, i dont have the words to explain, you have shown everything in this marvellous write, the realities with the mixture of sweet and bitterness...a very power write with deep thoughts...bravo, bravo....thanks for sharing 10++++++ nd A++++ rgds asif

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Dr Rajesh Kumar Vaid 02 December 2008

A poem, which, with deliberation, paints the thoughts of reality of existence, and things we think we do, or we do! Well done.

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Maryam Khan 01 December 2008

nice write all that i can say is that u r really a vry good poet as i always used to say this but u really r wel done Maryam

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Sarwar Chowdhury 30 November 2008

Indeed, powerful eloquence! ! A picture you painted here which come in people's mind. ....things let people to think this way. I agree with Sulaiman that there is a root. 10+++

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Wojja Fink 04 April 2010

This life is nothing But a wakeful dream I was predisposed to live Then Why am I rebellious To my default operating system I keep on customizing My intrinsic programming With an artificial intelligence Errors and bloopers And what I get in the end Is nothing but A rootless existence Just brilliant in a rootfull kind of way.. only those who haven't lost their roots can say.. ..Simply.....beautiful beyond words...John

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Rani Turton 09 December 2008

A deeply profound poem in which one's intrinsic thoughts have been written with emotional restrainst.

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Min Sia 08 December 2008

Truly mind provoking..revealing what was once been so blind within... Wonderful poem..truly a piece of art!

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Great Read. I loved it! It made me smile.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 07 December 2008

This life is nothing But a wakeful dream I was predisposed to live Then............................................. it is the crux of quest from time immemorial living gets baffled by the life by the appocalypse it is the rainbow over the blue sky in time and space queries when all unanswered onto the last dregs of rain.............wonderful verse by the living slowly sprucing the skin of life and again on decline, yet introspective, history repeats on and on the body of eternal stream slithering to the void of vastness, great write,10++++, thanks for sharing

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