A Sad Observation Poem by Sandra Feldman

A Sad Observation

Rating: 5.0


We're plain no good
That's what we are,
It's just a miracle
We've come so far.

Technically,
Incredible.
Humanly,
Despicable.

Tuesday, September 24, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: opinion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 26 September 2019

The irony is very clear. Humans who are technically terrific terribly use their capabilities to destroy each other. Instead of using their wisdom for the good of mankind, they do otherwise.. A well composed poem, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 September 2019

An astute observation on people's behavior. Yet, I hope we can still see the day when all are united for the welfare of all. A perceptive and incisive write.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 September 2019

Where there is no good plain there is chance to slip down. Human conditions should have technically beautiful perception of love and care. An amazing poem is well penned.

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Bill Cantrell 24 September 2019

There is some good in man, though they be few and far between, one day soon the wicked shall be forcibly removed, so let the wicked enjoy this moment for it will be short lived

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