louis rams

Gold Star - 11,691 Points (09/13/1943 / new york city)

A Short Verse - Poem by louis rams

stillborn
reborn
wife dying
child crying

faith is all this world has left
so let us put it to the test

escape from the flaming hell
mother and child are doing well.


Comments about A Short Verse by louis rams

  • Indira Renganathan (6/5/2009 6:00:00 AM)

    Quite insightful giving a faithful approach to life....thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Kesav Easwaran (4/27/2009 7:03:00 AM)

    i love this write as a whole...a short verse going long in its insight...and far in its meaning...10 (Report)Reply

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  • (2/25/2009 11:46:00 PM)

    I love the first lines its great

    Krista
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  • (2/25/2009 6:25:00 AM)

    Short but satuated with intelligence. (Report)Reply

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  • (2/25/2009 5:20:00 AM)

    You have found your poetic voice in this one.10, of course.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra
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  • (2/24/2009 7:34:00 PM)

    A truth well told. excellent write. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 24, 2009



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