Kranthi Pothineni

A Small Line - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Smiled in my heart
Looking at a line
It looks very small
Many eyes ignore it
It’s a small line

Its length is small
Its width is small
So it looks small
It’s a small line
Its depth is secret

It fills the eyes
It makes us cry
But eyes ignore it
It’s a small line
It has a name

It is your name
It is my name
But we can’t see it
It’s a small line
It is on tombstone

Between those two dates
Which many eyes read
Ignoring a small line
It’s a small line of life
Line of life is very short

So don’t waste it
In hating and hurting
So make it count
With smile and warmth
Leave your mark forever

Comments about A Small Line by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (5/12/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    A good poem of positivism and entertained as such. (Report) Reply

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  • (12/17/2009 8:08:00 PM)

    Yes. Life is so fragile, and we must make every second count. A beautiful poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/10/2009 6:23:00 PM)

    So don’t waste it
    In hating and hurting
    So make it count
    With smile and warmth
    Leave your mark forever.beautiful lines and leave deep impact on mind... lovely to read...............10

    read mine beautifulworld..... beauty...anywhere......colour
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  • Indira Renganathan (8/16/2009 2:44:00 AM)

    Teaching the truth...the last two stanzas do it very well....thank you (Report) Reply

  • Saadat Tahir (6/21/2009 9:55:00 AM)

    very very strong
    novel and different way of saying a great truism

    very well done
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  • (5/23/2009 12:30:00 AM)

    yeah a nice one indeed....thanks for your poems...enjoyed them very much..I ll visit you soon..regards shan from srilanka (Report) Reply

  • (5/15/2009 11:35:00 PM)

    an eloquent and beautiful lines.........see my 10 ++ (Report) Reply

  • (2/26/2009 12:37:00 AM)

    Leave you're line forever nice nice work

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  • (2/17/2009 9:21:00 PM)

    a lovely small line..the finishing was excellent (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 17, 2009