Isolation Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

Isolation

Rating: 5.0


This heart became slave
It sleeps in the past cave
That life had kept in grave
It made my smiles shave

Life seems to be in a rave
It took away what it gave
By leaving me in a stave
It made me kneel in nave

He tried his best to save
With his words of brave
To make my heart feel pave
So it lights and stops to crave

Slowly it started to behave
Felt will overcome the wave
But life acted like a knave
And labeled me has deprave

Now I am a muted enslave
With no songs of outbrave
Nor this pathos of mine will lave
So I had made myself enclave

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Janell Cressman 14 August 2009

very cleaverly written! ! !

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Louis Rams 14 August 2009

you can become a slave to isolation. NICE! A TEN

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Joseph Poewhit 14 August 2009

If the pains of life become too much, isolation is one form of escape.

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Surya . 14 August 2009

nicely written.good remedy.thanx for sharing voted10 surya

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Shashendra Amalshan 15 August 2009

Nice indeed.. As always sir, what is significant in your lines is that emotions seem to ooze out through your poems.. and I like your use of rhymes.. sometimes with too much rhymes I find it difficult to bring out emotions.. Yet you do well friend... in fact it kinda make the reader move with your lines.. good.. love shan

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 25 August 2009

So nice a write. Quite rhyming and rhythmatic. Kudos.

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rago rago 18 August 2009

finely written.................

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Antonio Liao 16 August 2009

an isolation of desire makes a perfect man......isolation to reach the phantom of the mind, leads every want to shed the truth of the call.....a very suggestive poem in our time.....wonderful my friend... God bless....a 10 ++++

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Eyan Desir 16 August 2009

Good write...10s....................

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Catrina Heart 15 August 2009

Now I am a muted enslave With no songs of outbrave Nor this pathos of mine will lave So I had made myself enclave -------- Alone and being isolated is such a pain and burden..........well written poem in great rhymes! ! ! Hope to see your children's poem someday! ! !

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