A Smile A Star Poem by mark nwagwu

Well done, my friend, well done!

beautiful....... :)

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a wonderful poem dat reminds of the circumstance dat surrounds my birth

really good one, mark...a pleasure to read 10

it realy did put smile on my face when i end reading this poem..its a very beautiful write sir.....thanks 10

a heart warming write, a smile can works wonders, instill bliss in the inner chamber

A postitive smile that lit up your life just when you needed it. Lovely. Thank you for sharing this warm experience. As always, Sandra

If I were a critic I'd probably say ' I'm not impressed, the rhyming's not constant, the flow in the second stanza is cut short and the length of the lines is inconsistant', but I'm no critic so i'll say this from my heart ' the message was real and the poem felt natural, not following literary expectations, so from me it's congraculations.

Thoughtful expressions....Vote 10 has been clicked with joy.