I saw her shoes
and liked their look
And I said to her
Please give me your feet
When you've said that to her, it means, you want her heart too.Another excellent piece from you my bro Mark.I luv vit! !
Your poem reminds me an Indian mythological anecdote Gopis [divine women consort of Lord Krishna LK] portrayed LK but not feet lest He’ll leave them…and here you’ve captured feet leaving no chance to leave you…Masterly Mark Sir Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK
i see, you liked her shoes because of her feet.... :) very nice....10 Hataw
Love this poem lol...having a love of shoes myself this really did put a picture in my mind...thank you...
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I would like to translate this poem
one asks for the hand or the heart...asking for feet...the young should take a lesson or two on how to woo from you, prof!