I Saw Her Shoes Poem by mark nwagwu

I Saw Her Shoes

Rating: 5.0

I saw her shoes
and liked their look
And I said to her
Please give me your feet

Onelia Avelar 08 November 2008

This is very sweet :)

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 November 2008

When you've said that to her, it means, you want her heart too.Another excellent piece from you my bro Mark.I luv vit! !

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Indira Babbellapati 11 November 2008

one asks for the hand or the heart...asking for feet...the young should take a lesson or two on how to woo from you, prof!

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Your poem reminds me an Indian mythological anecdote Gopis [divine women consort of Lord Krishna LK] portrayed LK but not feet lest He’ll leave them…and here you’ve captured feet leaving no chance to leave you…Masterly Mark Sir Voted 10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Little Hatila ;) 12 December 2008

i see, you liked her shoes because of her feet.... :) very nice....10 Hataw

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Fiona Davidson 22 November 2008

Love this poem lol...having a love of shoes myself this really did put a picture in my mind...thank you...

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 22 November 2008

Nice shoes, well that seals it... Andrew 10

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Reshma Ramesh 14 November 2008

hehe............well penned

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