I saw her shoes
and liked their look
And I said to her
Please give me your feet
one asks for the hand or the heart...asking for feet...the young should take a lesson or two on how to woo from you, prof!
When you've said that to her, it means, you want her heart too.Another excellent piece from you my bro Mark.I luv vit! !
This is very sweet :)
Your poem reminds me an Indian mythological anecdote Gopis [divine women consort of Lord Krishna LK] portrayed LK but not feet lest He’ll leave them…and here you’ve captured feet leaving no chance to leave you…Masterly Mark Sir
i see, you liked her shoes because of her feet.... :)
Love this poem lol...having a love of shoes myself this really did put a picture in my mind...thank you...
Nice shoes, well that seals it... Andrew 10
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