The stable was cold
and Joseph too
The donkey was cold
and Mary too
Jesus is born
and wamth is on
With just a few words, a war can be won.... one birth can do the same. Thanks.
interesting.maybe u read poems on childhoods to trigger ur memories.how can i get a free copy of ur novel
nice poem, with Jesus born...the warmth of holiness and spirituliaty..evanescent blessings.. are born
You have mastered the art of simplicity in a very few lines. Lovely. Warm regards, Sandra
Wonderful poem and so simplistic, when warmth was on Great Love encompassed us all..........10+
wow......how did u think of this....it is beautiful................
i know how frozen selves melt in the aura of masters...a great read, prof!
Mark, this is so insightful, concise.. amazing last two lines. today only i attended a five day retreat by a Zen monk, in his presence- the warmth was on.10 Mamta
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Excellent Parallelism