Explore Poems GO!

A Song For My Lost One

Rating: 5.0
I have lost you on this day when I was eight,
Every Spring brings this day to renew memory light.
All days run in rapid race through works to cover,
But today's morn is dedicated to pluck the flower.

I clean carefully your smiling fixed, framed, faded face,
I wreathe and decorate flowers faithfully with lace
And incenses' aroma alters room's time and space,
And light memory is enlightened with memory fresh.
My memory reminds today how you loved me carefully,
Read More
Monday, September 5, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: art,death,life,time
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
COMMENTS
Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 June 2019
day when I was eight,8 17 26 35 44 53ETC IMMORTAL THINGS HAPPEN TO ALL GENERALLY APPLY PARETO'S LAW WILL YE CHECK BACK WHAT HAPPENED @17 TELL ME EXTRAORDINARY read my MOMS SMILES UR AN UPCOMING POET
0 0 Reply
Chinedu Dike 22 January 2018
Sad story of irreplaceable loss embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. A well articulated piece of poetry nicely penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing RAJAT.
1 0 Reply
Bharati Nayak 22 January 2018
I clean carefully your smiling fixed, framed, faded face, I wreathe and decorate flowers faithfully with lace And incenses' aroma alters room's time and space, And light memory is enlightened with memory fresh.- - - - Memories have been so nicely framed in this poem.A great poem.Congratulations.
1 0 Reply
Rajat Ghosh 28 June 2017
Thank you very much....@Dr.Tony Brahmin....Your words are inspiration for me....thanks a lot.....
1 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 26 June 2017
Every Spring brings today's morn is dedicated to pluck the flower. incenses' aroma alters room's time and space, how you loved me carefully, for your powerful invisible hand I am to wait here at bank for bargee help me crossing river These are the points i collected from your beautiful poem. Thank you for your thoughts, imaginations. tony
1 0 Reply
Dr Antony Theodore 13 May 2017
Time had cut the cord carelessly between you and me, And I today try to tightly knot the torn lace in mournful glee. a good poem on life and time, thank you dear poet. tony
1 0 Reply
B.m. Biswas 08 September 2016
keep writing..... ... .... I am elated.
1 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 05 September 2016
Every Spring brings this day to renew memory light. What an amazing poem this is really ion death topic with art of time! 10
1 0 Reply

Delivering Poems Around The World

Poems are the property of their respective owners. All information has been reproduced here for educational and informational purposes to benefit site visitors, and is provided at no charge...

6/13/2021 7:22:40 PM # 1.0.0.621