A Special Gift Poem by Emma Adamyan

A Special Gift

Rating: 4.9

Since you`ve been loving me
I was given a special gift,
It still sounds so unusual...
Was it your favour to me
Or maybe the Lord decided I should hold it...
For it showed where I was wrong and right,
It revealed your secrets, so I could treat you right,
It warmed me in days of cold,
Decorated like only could gold,
Full of enthusiasm
It made a unique rhythm,
Its only existence gave a birth for my hopes,
Sometimes it went rapid, sometimes shady,
Sorry I hardly knew how to make it steady,
All I could is feeling it deep inside your chest,
That`s how it became mine,
For me to keep it like a shrine,
It is native, restless and smart-
The broken beating of your heart!

Chitra - 01 January 2010

A nice poetic write, emotional in tone...heartfelt and soul-stirring! !

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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2010

The Russian writer's flavour for details.................well written.10

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fine poem.. thank you for visiting me. :) .

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Maria Shipka 06 December 2009

Nice so gently poem like a heart of woman....I´m wonder if you write your poems in Russian language...Thank you for sharing :)

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Sarwar Chowdhury 01 October 2009

thoughtful and beautiful! the way you thought out, really amazing! 10+

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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

The broken beating of your heart has provoked though restlessly. But gift of love has motivated mind with greatness. An excellent poem is beautifully penned.10

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Broken Shell 15 July 2016

This is beautifully expressive with powerful emotion and intimacy. Love it.

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Emma Adamyan 18 June 2010

yes dear Nivedita, a beating of my beloved`s heart was that special gift of mine. imagine, u have ur heart, but its beating depends on another`s feelings. joy or sadness all is shared between both. that was the point of my poem. thx for ur mark!

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 17 June 2010

Cascade poetry…culminated in …’ The broken beating of your heart! ’ …was it the gift? or you felt it? Melancholy but luxury of readers and poets too…finish is anticlimax Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10

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Truly from the Heart. Enjoyed the read. Well done!

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