A Still Desire Poem by Rafique Farooqi

Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur

A Still Desire

Rating: 5.0


Life moves with,
every breath,
a desire stands still,
eyes seek with each blink,
the mirage keeps,
with glitters,
steps are written,
on the sands,
a tale in faded word,
erasing stains her face,
love is a dream,
unforeseen unforgiven.

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Ejaz Khan 25 July 2009

Beautiful, very well penned and flows smoothly!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 02 August 2009

Life moves with, every breath, a desire stands still, eyes seek with each blink, ...always depends and seeks desire....and it also seeks more.....beautiful thought read mine desire.. thoughts and you ask more

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beautiful poem, lovely expression

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Indira Renganathan 29 July 2009

Felt-written words...though short speaks a lot...thanks

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Lady Grace 27 July 2009

a nice work written in smart mode..

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 27 July 2009

Love is a desire stands still, with the flow of time becomes stronger and stronger..... a paradox in almost everyone's life, Rafique. A good poem, well written and mild. Best Wishes Naseer

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Rafique Farooqi

Dist. Gujranwala village Madni Pur
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