A Story Begins Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

A Story Begins

Rating: 3.9

You are like a tiny boat,
Sailing alone in the blue ocean
Seeking to hug your dream lover
Dipping yourself with intense emotion

You are like a flying bird
Searching for your caressed loved one
Immersing yourself in deep romance
And dazzling right under the sun

You are like a rainbow picture
Embracing yourself with your longed one
Who kissed you like a sudden storm
And thereby a story had just begun!

Copyright © 2013 Indranil Bhaduri

Rituparna Sen 09 September 2013

Lovely short poem. Romance begins.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 21 November 2013

Woah d sudden storm kisses, how true! ! A creative romantic poem with a difrent twist. Kudos!

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Nasarudheen Parameswaran 06 October 2013

A beautiful poem of sweet images.

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Farah Ilyas 25 September 2013

Yeap here at the ending appreciation's notes have been begun :) lovely romantic poem, brief but too deep..

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Payal Parande 13 September 2013

oh you always sprinkles romance in air...bravo sir

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Prasanna Mishra 25 April 2014

Each line flows freely as an honest articulation.

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Jasbir Chatterjee 08 March 2014

Every human life is by itself a unique story in itself...the joys and sorrows, successes and failures...

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Monami Ghosh 21 January 2014

There is a certain intensity to this that I appreciate. Also, the title is engaging and the build up to the closure.. beautiful I would say. All the stages.. fluid and deep. Thanks for sharing.

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Bhavna Singh 13 January 2014

very nice poetry......indranil bhaduri

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Patricia Grantham 07 January 2014

Oh how I really love this very passionate write. A love as deep as the ocean. A story with a beginning and hopefully a happy ending. Loved it.

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