Crumpled Piece Of Paper Poem by Indranil Bhaduri

Crumpled Piece Of Paper

Rating: 4.5
 


I was all alone
With the pale candle light burning by my side.
Disturbed thoughts and isolated mind
Eating up my soul.
The broken heart sobbed in distress,
And gradually, the solitude engulfed me..
I franctically searched for my lost feelings
And my lustful wishes got devastated
For my missing love,
With me lamenting in melancholy.
The half empty glass fell down
Freeing itself out of my trembling hands,
And broke into numerous pieces,
With scattered capsules all over the floor
Till you came in as the beautiful angel
And put your tender lips on mine..
Bringing the sparkles of distant stars all around
With your divine kiss,
Opening the doors of paradise
For my lonely soul to step in..
Thus leaving the crumpled piece of paper
Lying on the table
Penned with my last wishes saying
'Goodbye World'..! !

Copyright © 2012 Indranil Bhaduri

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Katinka Havermans 07 August 2012

Beautiful poem. Lots of lovely words in it. (I admit I am never so good in my poems with English words as it is not my native language) Love it really!

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Alafe Ramat 08 August 2012

Loving every words, ....kip on d good job.

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Payal Parande 08 August 2012

i am no expert but i am going to tell what i felt from it... at start you have told how much you are missing your love and how poignant it was but yet beautifully written then using the scattered glass as your last hope was gone but then telling you its not the end your love comes and and takes you with her...as you are telling love only not exist only in in our life it exits after the life too so brilliant way to tell that love never dies, absolutely remarkable...loved it thank you for sharing it this wonderful piece love payal

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Angelica Vargas 08 August 2012

I like the thoughts and the way things were described in this poem..

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Sunil Babu 09 August 2012

you are well aware of lost world and hopes.its a real fodder for thought.

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Jaishree Nair 30 August 2015

Suicide in love failure. Two contrast pieces of imagery. The depressed and sorrowful state in the world and the Paradise where an Angel awaits your advent. An apt title. The moment of weakness well captured and defined. Thanks for sharing

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Patricia Grantham 25 November 2013

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

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Patricia Grantham 25 November 2013

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

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Patricia Grantham 25 November 2013

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

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Patricia Grantham 25 November 2013

Saved by the bell (Angel) as they say. I can help but say that this poem is written with such depth of feelings that it causes the reader to feel like they are there living the moment. A very heartfelt and well crafted write. Lovely.

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