To My Anonymous Lover Poem by Valsa George

To My Anonymous Lover

Rating: 4.9


Somewhere in a strange land
An unknown heart throbs for me
Etching an amorous graffiti
On the blank walls of my mind
Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes
Fondly surveying and scanning me,
Speaking to me in silence
And keeps me awake in the night
I feel it all, I hear it all
Filling me with a sweet ache!

When night birds croon in the woods
And their mates answer the serenade,
When the moon begins her somnambulistic walk
And light beams percolate through pine needles,
When a hundred eyes open in the blue heights
To watch over the sleeping Earth,
When the whistle of a train is heard far away
And its music wanes into a monotonous drone,
When the rooster makes his first clarion call
Breaking the serene silence of the night,
When glow worms float in darkness
Like cruise ships over the sea,
When night gales shake the slender coniferous trees
And wind whistles among their leaves,
When sailing clouds blind the stars
And the night turns into an ebony shade,
When the opening Jasmine secretly exults
In her own exotic scent,

Sitting in my dimly lighted room
I draft this message of love
Pouring all my warmth into it
Thus emptying my love laden heart
That blazes with the fire of love
And encode it in cryptic script
To be mailed to you, my love!

Oh, it might take much time
Better it be a whispered endearment
Sent through this perfumed night breeze
That shall carry it from this end to that end

So kindly leave your window open!



Wish you all Poem Hunter Members A HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! !

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In keeping with the spirit of Valentine's Day, the poet's fancy soars to an imaginary lover!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 18 March 2020

Oh, it might take much time Better it be a whispered endearment Sent through this perfumed night breeze That shall carry it from this end to that end So kindly leave your window open! YOUR LOVELIER POEM MAKES ME REQUEST THEE DO READ MINE SIMILAR ONE SOME ONE SOMEWHERE WAITS FOR ME

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 December 2019

It's a great poem dear madam! I sincerely appreciate your endearing expression! My pleasure reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again to my utmost satisfaction!

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Magadha Rani 19 December 2019

An extraordinary romantic poem dear mam. thoroughly liked and enjoyed. thank you for sharing....10+++++

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2020

All words in the poem lines, mesmerizing and cocerning love, all words so well captured in a loveliest way. An amazing poem about LOVE. Thank you for sharing this timeless Valentine poem, Valsa. A 10 Topscore and much much more.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 31 January 2020

error, must be (first line) concerning. Thank you.

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Suresh Kumar Ek 22 September 2020

somewhere in an unknown land a poetic heart throbs for you

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Kumarmani Mahakul 08 September 2020

Etching an amorous graffiti On the blank walls of my mind Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes Fondly surveying and scanning me, Speaking to me in silence And keeps me awake in the night........much impressive lines those I love most. A marvelous poem is amazingly shared. Full vote sure.

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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2020

Oh, it might take much time Better it be a whispered endearment Sent through this perfumed night breeze That shall carry it from this end to that end So kindly leave your window open! - - - - -Wow- -What a mesmerizing write- - -! ! !

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Hannington Mumo 28 August 2020

This is an adroitly indited epitome of connoisseur-grade poetic eclat...all so tastefully laced with fine sumptuous twists of wit and of an eidetic passionate yearning unrivalled in the long variegated chronicles of LOVE. Well, I'm exceedingly glad to find your nectarous pen faithfully on paper still, my seasoned Prof: -) Kudos!

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Sachidananda Panda 21 July 2020

An extraordinary romantic poem. enjoyed the exquisite narration... Thanks

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