poet Valsa George

Valsa George

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To My Anonymous Lover

Somewhere in a strange land
An unknown heart throbs for me
Etching an amorous graffiti
On the blank walls of my mind
Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes
Fondly surveying and scanning me,
Speaking to me in silence
And keeps me awake in the night
I feel it all, I hear it all
Filling me with a sweet ache!

When night birds croon in the woods
And their mates answer the serenade,
When the moon begins her somnambulistic walk
And light beams percolate through pine needles,
When a hundred eyes open in the blue heights
To watch over the sleeping Earth,
When the whistle of a train is heard far away
And its music wanes into a monotonous drone,
When the rooster makes his first clarion call
Breaking the serene silence of the night,
When glow worms float in darkness
Like cruise ships over the sea,
When night gales shake the slender coniferous trees
And wind whistles among their leaves,
When sailing clouds blind the stars
And the night turns into an ebony shade,
When the opening Jasmine secretly exults
In her own exotic scent,

Sitting in my dimly lighted room
I draft this message of love
Pouring all my warmth into it
Thus emptying my love laden heart
That blazes with the fire of love
And encode it in cryptic script
To be mailed to you, my love!

Oh, it might take much time
Better it be a whispered endearment
Sent through this perfumed night breeze
That shall carry it from this end to that end

So kindly leave your window open!



Wish you all Poem Hunter Members A HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! !

Poem Submitted: Thursday, February 13, 2014

Poet's Notes about The Poem

In keeping with the spirit of Valentine's Day, the poet's fancy soars to an imaginary lover!

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  • Suresh Kumar EkSuresh Kumar Ek (9/22/2020 10:33:00 AM)

    somewhere in an unknown land
    a poetic heart throbs for you

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (9/8/2020 9:06:00 AM)

    Etching an amorous graffiti
    On the blank walls of my mind
    Where ever I am, I feel a pair of eyes
    Fondly surveying and scanning me,
    Speaking to me in silence
    And keeps me awake in the night........much impressive lines those I love most. A marvelous poem is amazingly shared. Full vote sure.

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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (8/30/2020 1:35:00 PM)

    Oh, it might take much time
    Better it be a whispered endearment
    Sent through this perfumed night breeze
    That shall carry it from this end to that end

    So kindly leave your window open!
    - - - - -Wow- -What a mesmerizing write- - -! ! !

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  • Hannington Mumo (8/28/2020 7:21:00 PM)

    This is an adroitly indited epitome of connoisseur-grade poetic eclat...all so tastefully laced with fine sumptuous twists of wit and of an eidetic passionate yearning unrivalled in the long variegated chronicles of LOVE. Well, I'm exceedingly glad to find your nectarous pen faithfully on paper still, my seasoned Prof: -) Kudos!

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  • Sachidananda PandaSachidananda Panda (7/21/2020 2:01:00 AM)

    An extraordinary romantic poem. enjoyed the exquisite narration... Thanks

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (3/18/2020 5:53:00 AM)

    Oh, it might take much time
    Better it be a whispered endearment
    Sent through this perfumed night breeze
    That shall carry it from this end to that end

    So kindly leave your window open!
    YOUR LOVELIER POEM MAKES ME REQUEST THEE DO READ MINE SIMILAR ONE SOME ONE SOMEWHERE WAITS FOR ME

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (3/7/2020 12:32:00 AM)

    Sitting in my dimly lighted room/I draft this message of love/Pouring all my warmth into it/Thus emptying my love laden heart......endearing imagination....captivating poetic expression! A sweet poem loaded with fabulous contemplation of love! I love to read this fascinating piece of work again and again dear madam! (Poetess Magadha)

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  • Me Poet Yeps PoetMe Poet Yeps Poet (2/14/2020 2:57:00 AM)

    And those who now read your exotic loving poetry have flown away lke bees from my honey comb that was, , , , lovely lively poem o poetess 475th

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  • Kesav EaswaranKesav Easwaran (2/1/2020 5:22:00 AM)

    A great Valentine! Romance rich. Images aplenty 10+

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (1/31/2020 6:01:00 AM)

    All words in the poem lines, mesmerizing and cocerning love, all words so well captured in a loveliest way.
    An amazing poem about LOVE. Thank you for sharing this timeless Valentine poem, Valsa. A 10 Topscore and much much more.

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    Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan(1/31/2020 7:02:00 AM)

    error, must be (first line) concerning. Thank you.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (1/3/2020 10:20:00 AM)

    Typographical error: please read as healthy

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (1/3/2020 10:18:00 AM)

    It's a great romantic poem for all weather and all seasons! I sincerely appreciate and andmire your great thinking faculty! Scintillating imagination! Fascinating expression! My great pleasure reading this endearing piece of poetry time and again dear madam! Stay always happy, health and blessed!

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  • Magadha RaniMagadha Rani (12/19/2019 12:13:00 AM)

    An extraordinary romantic poem dear mam. thoroughly liked and enjoyed. thank you for sharing....10+++++

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (12/11/2019 8:33:00 AM)

    It's a great poem dear madam! I sincerely appreciate your endearing expression! My pleasure reading this magnificent piece of poetry time and again to my utmost satisfaction!

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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (10/7/2019 12:52:00 AM)

    I feel glad to have read this old poem almost accidentally,
    and wonder how many such gems lie buried in unknown depths of PH.
    Brilliant imagery full of sentiments and passion.
    I don't maintain a My Poems list, or else it would go there.

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  • Anjandev Roy (10/3/2019 11:46:00 AM)

    Lovely poem.wonderful to read.Thank u. anjandev roy.

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  • Thabani KhumaloThabani Khumalo (9/15/2019 2:25:00 PM)

    And upon each encounter of my magical sleep, I continue from the last dream that your lips touched my mouth... Valsa George... Unravel this majestic mystery to me that I may do so understand why I repeat in reading this piece as I do a really good song. I think I rely on this piece giving me peace in my sleep. Please keep up the good work and keep us simple poets sustained in your work.

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  • Prabir GayenPrabir Gayen (9/6/2019 1:06:00 AM)

    Oh, it might take much time
    Better it be a whispered endearment
    Sent through this perfumed night breeze
    That shall carry it from this end to that end

    So kindly leave your window open! ...nice 10+++++++

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (8/6/2019 8:27:00 AM)

    Typos: please read as: work on love.

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  • Dr Dillip K SwainDr Dillip K Swain (8/6/2019 8:25:00 AM)

    Sitting in my dimly lighted room/I draft this message of love/Pouring all my warmth into it/Thus emptying my love laden heart.....endearing expression! This lovely piece of poetry is one among my favorite poems! I derive great pleasure reading this wonderful work love poem time and again!

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