Outside rain plays its prolonged summer song.
Gray windowpanes record earth's silent cry.
Faint light is just a whisper caught by time,
Words spare and elegant, long lost in space.
Fingers are warmed by what a mood can make.
Touch is as delicate as filigree.
Wind blows the candle of our landscape out.
It takes us, Friend, where all old raindrops go.
Once again- beautiful feelings described in even more beautiful words. Your imagery so delicate - is aptly captured by a Pakistani Poet in the line: 'settles upon the mind with the nicety of a dragonfly' Take care
Another marvelous little treasure from you Sandra, well penned as usual. --Melvina--
Skillfully written by a fine lady..All the very best X Love duncan X
[MMMMMM]… Mellifluous… Mellifluent… Mellisonant… Melodious… Metaphor…Ma’am Ms. Nivedita UK
Dear Sandra, I loved reading this poem! We are now facing the Delhi summer! The most trying months will be june & july due to humidity! Delhi normally does not get enough rains, because people cut the trees! I saw your face for the first time on 'Bologi.com' poetry section! An authentic beauty of a face painted by time, and those eyes showering loving grace! WITH BEST WISHES, - Raj
There is so much in this poem...and not a bit of it predictable. Amazing. N
another elegant write from one of the best poet here in PH.And your writes are worth visiting and reading.Glad i found you and your lovely and caring words. Hugs, Meggie
Wind blows the candle of our landscape out. It takes us, Friend, where all old raindrops go ................................................................... Brilliant minor...Sandra... 10................................ Rindest regards, rsira
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Sandra, You are always worth reading. In this poem you fulfill the words of the German theologian Helmut Thielicke (sp?) : 'The poets have become the pastors of our time.' Additional blessings to your day whenever you get to reading this. Bill Grace