A Tale Of Bhimbetka Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Tale Of Bhimbetka

Rating: 5.0


(dedicated to my poet friend from India at poemhunter)

Bhim-bait-ka
Bheem sat on these rocks
the name is derived from
Sanskrit epic Mahabharata

largest collection of prehistoric art
discovered and explored
by Dr.V.S.Wakankar
a great archaeologist

from train he noticed caves
dotting the hills in distance
he cut through deep forest
climbed up to the caves

surrounded by northern fringe
of the Vindhyan ranges
lies 46 km south of Bhopal
in State of Madhya Pradesh

continuous habitation
from Early Stone Age
biggest repository
of Indian prehistoric art

one of earliest dwellings
of human beings
will take you back
to 35,000 years old history

prehistoric caves
fascinating paintings
to Paleolithic times
a cultural sequences

stone floors
hand-axes
hard quartz
tiny needles

cleavers, scrapers
stone hand mills
colored earth
called Ochre

a woman with a child
household chores
hunt documentation
raid during warfare

the Stone Age artists
painted their hopes, fears
weaving an enchantment
that still ensnares us

weather worn walls
over these caves
display great vitality
and narrative skill

experience the journey
back to Stone Age Man
move around gently
examine surroundings

each boulder
every overhanging rocks
speaks and describes
the magical history

rocky terrain
dense forest
craggy cliffs
over 600 rock shelters

vivid, panoramic detail
paintings in over 500 caves
depict the life and activity
prehistoric cave dwellers

hunting
dancing
music
horse riders

elephant riders
animals fighting
honey collection
bodies decoration

bison
tigers
lions
wild boar

antelopes
dogs
lizards
bulls

elephants
horses
crocodiles
rhinoceros

weapons
birds
musical instruments
pregnant women

burial
drinking
figures of Yakshas
men carrying dead animals

the tree gods
magical sky chariots
tunic like dresses
the existence of scripts

popular religious
ritual symbols
disguises, masking
household scenes

red
white
green
yellow

mixture of colors, soft red stone
manganese, hematite,
wooden coal, animal’s fat
extracts of leaves

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Wow.I have a very strong interest in archaeology and I love this poem. I hope someday to visit these caves.Good and very interesting freeform poem.Thanks so much it really brightened my day.A ten and a big smile from me.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 11 October 2008

this is a very good one

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Carol Rhodes 09 October 2008

You gave life to everything. You took us on another delicious learning experience. Thank you. Definitely have a sense of knowing the area. Carol

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Sandra Fowler 09 October 2008

Fascinating. Time out of mind. Very educational. Ten from me. Warm regards, Sandra

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Carl Harris 09 October 2008

As a historical narrative, this is quite a remarkable composition, Ahmad, and a rewarding one to read as it is packed full with so much knowlege of your very interesting subject. As a poem, it falls a little short, because there really is no ending to it, a summation or comment that would tie in all you spoke of prior to the ending. A closing verse would give this interesting write the poetic summation it needs.

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 09 October 2008

Well written and very antique and historical in description.

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