A Diary One (La Isla Bossa Nova) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Diary One (La Isla Bossa Nova)

Rating: 3.2


(dedicated to Fay Slimm, a great poet at poemhunter)

we're just very direct with each other
we give each other information in
as clear and honest a way as possible

it felt like no time had passed in the way
that we're so comfortable
with each other personally

we've been friends for such a long time
and we knew what boundaries we have with each other personally
and we knew that we could get great stuff out of each other

take my hand
and take my whole life too
what a wonderful world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 14 February 2009

More fabulous dedication to PH poet friends...great craft came from the heart...10

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Chitra - 14 February 2009

A very moving work,10+

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Chitra - 14 February 2009

A very moving work,10+

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John Tiong Chunghoo 14 February 2009

take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world these three lines say it all ahmad

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YAYY! ! Fay.. thank you for this one my friend.

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Irene Clark-hogg 08 October 2009

Although this reads more like prose than poetry, it is a wonderful dedication to friendship. Irene

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Ben Gieske 20 February 2009

Ah! Nice to have good friends. We can have all kinds of friends and at different levels. This one sounds like a friendship with deep ties. Continue on.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

'take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world ' - yes, it is a wonder. Peculiarly I like him. Beautiful poem, marvellous writing. Thank you. Greetings for you :)) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 18 February 2009

Nice poem. keep it up.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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