A Diary One (La Isla Bossa Nova) Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia

A Diary One (La Isla Bossa Nova)

Rating: 3.2


(dedicated to Fay Slimm, a great poet at poemhunter)

we're just very direct with each other
we give each other information in
as clear and honest a way as possible

it felt like no time had passed in the way
that we're so comfortable
with each other personally

we've been friends for such a long time
and we knew what boundaries we have with each other personally
and we knew that we could get great stuff out of each other

take my hand
and take my whole life too
what a wonderful world

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Seema Chowdhury 12 February 2009

a nice tribute to a friend.

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Aldo Kraas 12 February 2009

That poem is good.

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Carol Rhodes 12 February 2009

Ahmad, it is always a treat, a pleasure to read anything you write and share with us. Your tribute, your thanks to Fay Slimm is very much appreciated. Loved the glimpse into an actual exploration of an on-line developing/developed friendship. I loved the expressed pleasure but benefitted from your mature consideration of keeping the friendship within realistic and beneficial boundaries. Yes, as you delicately described, we, people, can be friends. The shared gift of creativity is the bonding material. Beautiful and natural. Carol

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C.R. Clark 13 February 2009

A very moving work, my friend. Thank you. Richard

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Mimi Fakhira 13 February 2009

Beautiful words expressed your deep meaning... Excellent work! Thanks for sharing.. Mimi

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Irene Clark-hogg 08 October 2009

Although this reads more like prose than poetry, it is a wonderful dedication to friendship. Irene

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Gargi Saha 24 February 2009

A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.

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Ben Gieske 20 February 2009

Ah! Nice to have good friends. We can have all kinds of friends and at different levels. This one sounds like a friendship with deep ties. Continue on.

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Maria Barbara Korynt 18 February 2009

'take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world ' - yes, it is a wonder. Peculiarly I like him. Beautiful poem, marvellous writing. Thank you. Greetings for you :)) Maria Barbara Korynt

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Amy Douglass (Fifita) 18 February 2009

Nice poem. keep it up.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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