(dedicated to Fay Slimm, a great poet at poemhunter)
we're just very direct with each other
we give each other information in
as clear and honest a way as possible
it felt like no time had passed in the way
that we're so comfortable
with each other personally
we've been friends for such a long time
and we knew what boundaries we have with each other personally
and we knew that we could get great stuff out of each other
take my hand
and take my whole life too
what a wonderful world
take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world these three lines say it all ahmad
YAYY! ! Fay.. thank you for this one my friend.
Although this reads more like prose than poetry, it is a wonderful dedication to friendship. Irene
A wonderful poem..........10++++++ Love & hugs.
Ah! Nice to have good friends. We can have all kinds of friends and at different levels. This one sounds like a friendship with deep ties. Continue on.
'take my hand and take my whole life too what a wonderful world ' - yes, it is a wonder. Peculiarly I like him. Beautiful poem, marvellous writing. Thank you. Greetings for you :)) Maria Barbara Korynt
Nice poem. keep it up.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
More fabulous dedication to PH poet friends...great craft came from the heart...10