A Cloud Came Down Poem by Ahmad Shiddiqi

A Cloud Came Down

Rating: 3.1

a cloud came down
and spread over
it kept on coming
closer and closer
tranquility and reassurance
along with peace
which descended

Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

nice symbolistic poem, very well written.......10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 August 2009

Clouds coming near as rain is a good sign no doubt.

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Kuji Soliman 28 August 2009

this is a very nice peice :) i loved it

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Obinna Eruchie 28 August 2009

A cloud descending on the ground representing peace has finally arrived in a place.

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Ruth Walters 28 August 2009

I like that sort of cloud..... Ruthy

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Khoirun Niam 31 August 2012

nice poem, and happy idul fitri

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Elaine Oxamendi Vicet 06 January 2011

Clouds can be beautiful or ominous, here it brings peace and tranquility. Good thoughts and sentiment and speaks of what the world needs in brief.

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Sally Plumb Plumb 10 September 2010

It gave me a lovely feeling. If you have time try 'Shower.'

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Michael Brock 06 May 2010

Brief poems are the best, this one says more with less. good use of imagery and word flow. thanks for sharing

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Lady Grace 01 November 2009

rain came down..it cools the place..

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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