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As Love Carries...

Rating: 5.0

I carry within shells
Indescribable feelings
Amidst luscious dreams
I carry unraveling memories

I carry a bunch of ripened hopes
Just before dawn's awakening
I carry lots of fiery kisses
My will is transfiguring

As black hawks fly vigorously
As white swans swim beautifully
I carry your soul inside my lenience
I carry your spirit inside my kindness

As golden deer runs to sovereignty hills
As silken buffalo roams on flourishing parks
I carry your love inside my undisputed tolerance
I carry your heart inside my undoubted indulgence

Vivacious and challenging harmonies
Widen my keen desire for miracle favors
As sensuous as Bartok's Bluebeard Castle
As mysterious as Scriabin's Vers La Flame

Amorous and vibrating melodies
As smooth as Handel's Ombra Mai Fu
As gentle as Puccini's Che Gelida Manina
Deepen my unrequited love for a divine princess

(dedicated to a great poet at poemhunter, Amy)

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sally Plumb 10 April 2009

this piece of writing is absolutely beautiful.

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Mimi Fakhira 09 April 2009

Beautiful and perfect! Keep writing..10.

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Louis Rams 09 April 2009

this is a very deep and beautiful love story and the way you express it is beyond compare. GR8 a ten

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Omar Ibrahim 09 April 2009

wow! ! ! it's perect! ! !

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Anthony Foster 09 April 2009

Brilliant poetic and discriptive.

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<font color =fusha>Amy 02 August 2009

Such an amazing poem

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Sabrina Jubahar 17 April 2009

one of the best poems i've ever read.....! ! !

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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, that's soooooooooooooo sweet :) loved it tons a lot :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: (: -Every rose starts out as an ash-Ashes 2 Roses :)

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T S 13 April 2009

Amazing write... full of expression and honesty..a very spectacular write. 10/10

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Joseph Poewhit 13 April 2009

The poem reflects the robust nature of your soul and heart very well.

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