What you want
Me to talk
Talk of your beauty
The gorgeousness of your body
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if you love someone, set her or him free...if s/he urs, sure to come back into ur embrace...yes, sadiq...love means freedom n space, respect n regard...
A thoughtful meaning behind a nice flow of words and a constant deep thought expressed in two last lines, creating an interesting effect. Very well written, and very deep, as usual.10
i agree with helen... the pleasure that both sides get... but it's fleeting... seeing the falseness of it is freedom... great write!
Talking is often where the trouble starts! Wise musings here, though we all love being wooed by great talkers.... HG: -) xx
Practicality to reality...driving on to our choice, to live in the flow...a freedom to the past and unborn future....a 10 love it Cate
You're a special poet to reveal the truth....and I agree with Indira Babbellapati..10