when i spoke to you
from my heart
you listened to me with a smile
your reply was from your mind
and that's when our conversation broke
when i speak from the heart
it is like the gush of the sea wave
we cannot draw the waves line
it comes..expresses and retreats
nothing is held back
when you speak from the mind
it is like a flying kite
though a true wind flights it up
it does not say all it has
a pair of hands holds it back
when a mind speaks to a mind
there is only a diplomatic noise
no word spoken is really meant
a conversations never begins even
when just a mind speaks to another
a tete a tete
a heart to heart..conversation alone
truth when facing truth alone
solves and resolves our gaps
Wow, deep insights here. Very precise language, such a plus here. (smile)
YES SIR! MIND SPEAKING TO A MIND IS LIKE THE DIPLOMATIC CONVERSATION OUR 'NEIGHBOUR' EXECUTES WELL - FULL OF DECEITS! SOLUTION WILL COME WHEN HEART SPEAKS TO A HEART! Great thought! 10! -Raj
when a mind speaks to a mind there is only a diplomatic noise no word spoken is really meant interesting philosophical poem, lovely to read
THE HEART SEES IT ALL, FROM THAT WE CAN NOT FALL. FANTASTIC WRITE!
'a tete a tete a heart to heart..conversation alone truth when facing truth alone solves and resolves our gaps ' ..ok, i like the way this is written..hearts have languages, it depends on how to express..but wait..i just want to ask if ''a tete a tete''is what word, , , i dont want to go to google so kindly send the meaning either in this page or in my inbox..am confused of it...thanks for inviting sammmmm...smileeeee
Hi Sam...delightful poem. Yes. Heart language is hard to come by these days. The head seems to let the ego take the lead.However, our poems may help enlighten as well as delight.10+++
A heartfelt write. Your second stanza expresses your emotions most effectively.10/10. Warm regards, Sandra
really nice.... difference between talking with my hear and talking with my mind... a very great theme..thoughts are so reflective... i love this 10+++ Maia
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Discerning, insightful and philosophical.