Deb Panda

Freshman - 602 Points (1992 / KEONJHAR, ODISHA, INDIA)

A Thought Captured In Her Eyes - Poem by Deb Panda

A thought descended over, Her;
Lustrous Eyes; brimmed with dreams,
To ascent over Her Childish Smile-
Unknown! Fear - prejudice of his cycle.

Mystery! Ungainly pain bloomed on Her-
Lips murmuring the song of victory;
Over prudence of the will; stately sin,
From raucous hurry, lands of her kin.

Gleam; does not bear those Eyes,
Mine- sedate in her penchant smile;
From scripts bygone; carnage in lost-
In granaries of Hope- dates of past.

Brilliant! A song in beats weaved-
Out of her waving lips-colours;
Of stately Music, in heart encumbered,
With agony, mortal men have feared.

Pure; Reverberates the chaste Epics,
Hailed high; song hails from heaven-
Upon the stretches of pain; delta-plane;
The beauty of her pledge settled in.

Smile; swears this lagged soul-
To alleviate from wills of thought,
Down the Autumn evening behind;
The wearied sun; sublime dancing Wind!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

These thoughts came strongly down my memory, when I see my niece just 11 months old smile...I don't how did i write them, or how those thoughts descended over there... That smile propels the heart to live with utmost faith with all, to be truthful, as the belief of child.... I dedicate this song to all whose smiles can bloom those higher ideals, and who are capable of such magical spell, in day to day trudges of the life... Only gleeful smile is the remedy, to all those frail pain.....So, let's smile...and shift our lives from boredom to a different sphere of joy, and happiness......

Comments about A Thought Captured In Her Eyes by Deb Panda

  • Hazel Durham (7/24/2015 6:49:00 AM)

    I didn't understand this poem but your notes makes it clear, a beautiful message of how a smile can lighten your day with feelings of joy and thankfulness for such a simple gesture!
    Thanks for sharing!
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  • So Close (12/12/2012 9:24:00 PM)

    very good write..the notes improved the beauty of the poem...very good write,

    »so close«
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  • Neetha Sasidharan (12/11/2012 9:19:00 AM)

    a good thought for the day through a grt poem....keep going on.........grt... (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (11/23/2012 12:30:00 AM)

    Lovely write. Thanks for the notes. I enjoyed reading it (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, October 17, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, October 17, 2012

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