(a Thought Of God) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr
(a Thought Of God)
In a blink of light my conscience is awake.
My senses open yet what is there to take?
Into my understanding I seek for something,
A reason for which makes life truly worth living.
Life seems magical exhibits myriad wonders,
No carnal being has measured as he ponders.
In this world of tribulations, is there still hope?
Is life destined to damnation, a fact we cannot cope?
On whose plan was this existence created?
Surely it must of great power that dominated!
A thought of a super Being may come to mind,
Or Someone out there, a God who mastermind!
The bible has attested we are created in His image,
The likeness of Him marked our presence to this age.
Just to think of the vastness of creations I witness to see,
I thought of God as the Master of everything including me!
A thought provoking poem with perfect rhythm and flow. He sent us here because still there is hope, We are here because we can cope. He designed us to always win, We let us down with a sense of sin.
Ammmmmazing thoughtful composition with fine ryhm/rythm......10+
You poem rings such truth to me and I love your rhyming style. Keep Writing, Marvin - you are on the right track with your life and with your writing. Best Wishes, Marilyn
A THOUGHT OF GOD.....very unique and with sensibility...you have also a deeper perception about life....hope you can read my EXTRAORDINARY LINES here, my depthness represents too.I am also in...to acrostic poems. With respect, Your kababayan, Simonette
when u are created his own image how can they you sinner? this is only thing confusing me...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/4/2024 10:34:37 AM # 1.0.0.1119
a wonderful write with great ryhme there