(a Neophyte Poet) Poem by Marvin Brato Sr

(a Neophyte Poet)

Rating: 5.0


Everyone is sort of a poet
If he learns how to appreciate
The myriad sentiments therein
Freely express them from within

Art is the sole expression
Of an innate poetic intuition
It's the infinite flow of emotion
The meaning to a life in action

Rhyme is when difference in tune
When flowers bloom in early June
And summer heralds the sunshine
Eliciting colors of the rainbow's fine

An inspired spirit of a live being
A source of view for myriad seeing
The young heart of wits inscribes poem
That instills solace to someone's dream

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ric Bastasa 09 September 2008

nice rhyme marvin you are in.

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Aijaz Asif 05 September 2008

i'm out of words marvin..a 10.thanks you have created something very beautifuly that every artist feel in thee

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Ershad Mazumder 26 August 2008

Thanks dear Marvin for sharing this piece with us. Are you sure that you are a neophyte poet? You are a born poet.You have poetic talent.Do not bother about who says what.Just express your soul.

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Ency Bearis 26 August 2008

excellent write...nice rhymes couplets stanzas...well done... Ency Bearis

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Onelia Avelar 26 August 2008

The last two stazas are very good - on the one hand - nice demonstration of rhyming Rhyme is when difference in tune When flowers bloom in early June... on the oder hand they bring joy and liberty - no strict rules, even in rhyming. Good word to the Neophyte Poets...and not only! best regards, one

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

Davao City, Philippines
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