A Torrid Summer-Day (Tanka) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

A Torrid Summer-Day (Tanka)

Rating: 5.0


in this torrid clime
only cicadas murmur
in utter stillness—
cold drinks and condensation
cold skin and perspiration

Thursday, October 26, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: drink,insects,summer
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Beevor 27 October 2017

know this well enough, wonderfully depicted in superb poetry

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

We hear summer's murmur with murmur of Cicadas. This is really very amazing poem wisely drafted and shared. Process of sweating goes on and wind bring cold effect. Sumner poem is amazing really...10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 October 2017

The climate of the region is hot and dry. A large homopterous insect with long transparent wings murmurs still here in calmness with cold drinks and condensation is observed. An amazing Tanka you have drafted seems to be natural in summer and humorous in life's expression. This is brilliant and excellent....10

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