A Trickle Of Thought -1 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin
A Trickle Of Thought -1
Innate talent is like a river
It will just flow freely
From the mind
Through the veins
To the heart and soul.
Copyright 2019, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved
2) i can " read" in this poem, that you like order, that you like a good structure and that your metaphors have perfect " relationships " . You have had a managerial position, where order prevails under your supervision. If I have not made you angry with all these statements, I am very satisfied.
3) You have used our own body as a metaphor for your poem, that is very special. You started with River, and then our mind, our veins (exactly like that river, there is liquid) and the rest heart and soul. It just touches me so much! Again and again. This is really brilliance at its best, I must admit.
4) Reading your excellent poem, makes me instantly awake. Truly awake and had the wish to read this time and again so oft as able. Since I am a paintress first, I see so many many paintings more in poems, especiially in this one. God´s Rich Blessings for you and your beloved family, Mrs.Juan-Austin. UP ToMyPoemList.
I like very much the use of the metaphors here. You excel in brilliance, Mrs. Juan-Austin and how. I have come back to reread this poem because of its perfect beauty. Perfection does only need that tad difference and this poem has that. Once again thank you so much for sharing,
another masterpiece deserves 10/10 and onto my fave list. Well done and thanks for sharing with us all your gemstone shapes poems
It is so nice and powerful poem, I am agree with you completely, but don't forget only for the talented poet things are smooth like that, as you are one of them, because you know how it is working, which you have explained in your marvellous poem..
It will just flow freely from the spirit......... ................ To the pen and paper.
So well expressed! The kind of Poetry You can't, And should not Forget!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 7:37:58 AM # 1.0.0.1119
WOW, dear Mrs. Juan-Austin, you are except a very keen observer, also a very very talented poetess. This we know already long time, but what we know already, must be repeated again, absolutely. People forget easily, I reckon. Your metaphores are brilliant. I can feel that river flowing, sure! A 10 Full Score!