A Trickle Of Thought -10 Poem by Rose Marie Juan-austin

A Trickle Of Thought -10

Rating: 4.6


The end we weep for
Is not the end of everything
It can unlock an avenue
Where our tears we shed
Will lead us to that
River of happiness.


Copyright 2020, Rose Marie Juan-Austin, All Rights Reserved

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 July 2020

Beautiful thoughts on life after life. I enjoyed it.

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valsa george 21 July 2020

This is our hope and relief! When we get drowned in tears, we hope to swim through the turbulent waters to reach the shore of happiness. This thought gives us the stamina to brave all difficulties of life...! A poem full of positive vibes!

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Valsa George 21 July 2020

This is our hope and relief. When we swim through turbulent waters, we expect to reach the shore of happiness. This thought gives us the stamina to brave all adversities of life. This poem disseminates a lot of positive vibes.... a sure 10. Rose Marie.... sorry for the late response as I was busy with my son's wedding!

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Yes this world isn't the end, the end that seems with frustration may bring the sea of happiness......true to each and every word scripted here with excellence 10++

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Shaun Cronick 24 July 2020

Another well written and superbly crafted poem addition to your fine series Rose Marie. 10+ and I wish you well.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2020

The End in Focus! ! ! Musing along with life! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shaun Cronick 28 July 2020

If you've just read a Rose Marie Juan Austin poem it's best to go back and reread it. For poetry magic, true poetry magic never fades.10+.

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

Always your optimistic spirit lead us to happiness, that is what we are discovering in the end of each of your excellent poems.. All the best, take care, kind regards

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Soran M. H 28 July 2020

Where our tears we shed Will lead us to that River of happiness.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 26 July 2020

I totally agree with you. I embrace the spirit of this brilliant poem! So well penned.............10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin

Rose Marie Juan-austin

Laoag City, Philippines
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