A Unique Love Story. Poem by M. Asim Nehal

A Unique Love Story.

Rating: 5.0


He was wearing a Bluetooth headset,
Talking to someone, very dear.
And next to him, a blind girl,
quiet and dejected, silently cursing her life
Suddenly overheard him;
You are my rainbow of the first rain,
You are my free-bird released from the heart's cage,
You are my white rabbit that hops on green,
You are my silver lining on dark clouds,
Without you I cannot think of living.

And her soul melted within the body,
For the first time she realized her existence,
She was trying hard to suppress her feelings,
Yet started to blush by moving her fingers,
Gently through her curly hairs,
Without knowing that he is talking to her beloved.

I cannot survive,
Like fish without water,
Like bee without flowers,
Like dunes without sand,
Like birds without wings,
You are my hope and you are my dream.

The girls said thank you so much,
Gave a hug and got down from the bus,
The boy removed his Bluetooth,
And before he could say or react,
The bus proceeded on…..

Thursday, February 25, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: cute love,blind love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Varsha M 25 February 2021

Sir whether to be angry or be pathetic. Whom to blame and who be sufferer. But a miscommunication bloomed.A good poetic reflection.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 25 February 2021

That sad. Two people miscommunicating. Every one needs love. Great love poem.

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Kostas Lagos 25 February 2021

Most excellent poem!

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Zoyza Da Vinka 01 March 2021

A surprising poem with interesting twist.

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Michael Jack 27 February 2021

Yes all disappeared.

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Gordon Walter 25 February 2021

I agree, it is one of its kind.

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Michael Jack 25 February 2021

Fascinating storyline. Nice poem,

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Captain Cur 25 February 2021

Well it appears they both walked off the bus very happy. The man saying sweet things to his beloved, and the blind girl believing she had been noticed.

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