A Vale Of Brightness Poem by Hazel Durham

A Vale Of Brightness

Rating: 5.0


Night is the darkness,
Day is the lightness,
Love is written across the oceans of emotions,
Death is a song of our lives as we dance our last jives,
Poetry is our hearts taking a high dive
Into inviting waters, a burst of feeling so alive,
Music is our sweet serenader our mood invader,
Nature is our zest for living as we feel the best,
Family is our anchor to feel the safety and take a rest,
Words can be brutal but words can be a star at night
Shining with all it's glorious might
To hold our hands in the darkness of the night,
To embrace our hearts and souls caressed by a holy light,
As we struggle and fight to find our way through the darkness
Through the lightness,
We find an ocean of goodness
That surges through our eternal souls,
To bring us into a vale of brightness.

Monday, November 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: life and death
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yiyan Han 20 November 2017

Wonderful description of life's journey. Oh yes, your poetry of words are a star at night...thanks for sharing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 November 2017

Dear Durham, you have so nicely defined the love and nature as well as poetry and family that I like most. Night is darkness where as day is brightness. Love is written across the oceans of emotions. A marvelous poem shared. Thanks for sharing. Full vote.

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Susan Williams 22 November 2017

So, here's my favorite favorite lines: despite PH's new rules Words can be brutal but words can be a star at night Shining with all it's glorious might To hold our hands in the darkness of the night, Total brilliance also throughout poem.

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Susan Williams 22 November 2017

Wow! ! ! There are golden nuggets of pure poetry in almost every line! ! ! So well done, Hazel! ! ! I know I'm dousing the page with exclamation points but blame your writing! ! ! I'm going to try to show you the lines I like best of the best but forgive me if I end up with all your poem! Well, PH says I need to trim so: And trim more- so fav line is: all of this poem! A million 10s

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Sekharan Pookkat 21 November 2017

Stars brighten in darkness And brings emotions in the moon light The symphony of music zest in the songs of nature And hold our hands together To shield our family with love The eternal soul echoes in mind reminding light, darkness, love and life. thanks for sharing such a beautiful poem.add my 10## too sekharan pookkat

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Valsa George 20 November 2017

Poetry is our hearts taking a high dive Into inviting waters, a burst of feeling so alive, Music is our sweet serenader our mood invader, Nature is our zest for living as we feel the best, Family is our anchor to feel the safety and take a rest, I so agree with your perceptions on life and everything that helps to make it meaningful! Poetry, Music and Nature... all these three condiments add flavor and sweetness to life! Great write Hazel! A sure 10

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