A War Inside My Mind Poem by Kevin Fisher

A War Inside My Mind

Rating: 4.1


They say that there is good and evil in everyones heart
With me theres more
It feels like inside my mind is a neverending war
Some are good
Others are evil
Yet some who just want to fight
This mental war is killing me slowly
Please let it end tonight
Day after day my head is pounding
I no longer care who wins
I don't care if its my good or happiness
Or even my worst of sins
This war may only end when I do
I feel this day is near
Suicide is for the weak
So I'll die very naturally
By a war inside my mind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i like it n i agree with ya tht suicide is 4 weak ppl...n i almost lost some1 who tryed 2 kill herself i'll make her read this pretacular sentence! ! gd job :) 10++

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Indira Renganathan 04 June 2009

Perplexity of mind in well understanding words....mindful

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emily corbin 22 April 2009

I really like this poem. It's different from anything else I've ever read in a good way. Keep up the really awesome work.

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June Feir-Cruz 14 April 2009

Again, I am right: You are a strong and a brave individual. We are always at odds with ourselves and your art is your salvation and your saving grace. Remember that: you will never be insane :)

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Private Girl 11 April 2009

i like your style, nice one keep it up xx

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enchanted G 30 September 2009

WOW I love it. This poem embodies what I ave been feeling for several years. I refuse to take my life but somehow I find enough strength to move forward. I love it!

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Tyease Collins 05 September 2009

haha i guess im weak. Tried suicide once but no luck. God didnt want me to go so easily. But nice poem though ^.^ -Ellie

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 03 September 2009

'Suicide is for the weak', ; it is heroic to struggle, to fight until death comes naturally.

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Clara Odelia Ciutara 21 August 2009

Hi Kevin, it's nice to read your poem. It's natural, and you could arrange such common things in a lovely way! Nice...

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Claire Hastie 29 June 2009

You actually remind me of myself. I too write a lot of angst, its a great relief to get it out on pen. My way of therapy too. I now try and write happy thoughts but its something I can't relate to as much. Your a good poet keep it up, and keep your pen closer than your enemies.

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Kevin Fisher

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