Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

A White Fall. - Poem by Fay Slimm

An overnight wonderland
Has coated my windowpane
Frostily, flakily white.

So rarely enjoyed in rain-
Sodden sea garden place
This soft flossy snow I lightly
Pace and experience before
Noonday thaw. A vast virgin
Blanket I must mark and stamp
With happy delight urging
To more, then bending, rolling
And gath'ring round heads I
Recall fond mem'ries with glee.
Tray-gliding, snowsliding, eyes
For white statue-men. This being
Ten again's appealing to me.!

Comments about A White Fall. by Fay Slimm

  • Tom Balch (6/3/2009 4:41:00 AM)

    Fantastic images bringing fantastic memories Fay,10+++ Tom (Report) Reply

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  • Myrtle Thomas (4/5/2009 8:31:00 PM)

    Ah a new snow fall so beautiful but here in Indiana we have ever so much.This is a very nostalgic poem very delightful a 10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/14/2009 11:05:00 PM)

    Very enjoyable journey back to childhood's winter joys. Hold on a second, I'll get my sled. (Report) Reply

  • (2/10/2009 3:57:00 AM)

    Reminds me of dylan thomas beautiful meteafors and really reminded me of winters past
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  • (2/7/2009 7:04:00 PM)

    Evocative, nostalgic and thoroughly worthwhile reading. A white, sparkling poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2009 9:45:00 AM)

    lovely written poem...i enjoyed reading this piece...Thanks! 10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/6/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    I love the nostalgia it captures. (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2009 11:47:00 PM)

    This is lovely and fun. Hey, why stop at having a second childhood? I think we're entitled to a couple dozen at least, (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2009 10:31:00 AM)

    another beautiful write....i never have an experience with snow but while reading this marvellous write i alomst felt how it would feels....beautyful, beautiful....thanks 10+++
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  • C. P. Sharma (2/3/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    The joy of the beauty of snowfall runs all through this poem. Well penned.
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  • (2/3/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    Beautifully described Fay....snow does have that effect on me too lol...thank you...Fi..10+ (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2009 6:31:00 AM)

    Enjoy it friend does not last long in sunny Cornwall 10 ++++ Chris (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2009 6:24:00 AM)

    Yes! I can taste the snow from this.
    Have you ever taken a snowbath? If not PLEASE do! It is fantastic. You need no clothes and about two minutes of resolve.

    Your usual great writing.

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  • (2/3/2009 6:11:00 AM)

    Thanks for the lovely imagery you have given me...wish to feel the snow...10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (2/3/2009 5:59:00 AM)

    Now I prefer to watch the snow from indoors! Lovely poem Fay, the snow looks beautiful,
    Lynda xxx
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, February 3, 2009

Poem Edited: Tuesday, February 3, 2009

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