A Wigged Clown Poem by Rini Shibu

A Wigged Clown

Rating: 5.0


So funny to see people
peeping into others life
A wigged clown
with glasses
may pop around
What they gain from
little details
Taking  pride to disclose
their personal matters
Do they get pleasure
in imitating or copying
Isn't this mirroring
a little dramatic
The second hand show
lack perfection
Which always lack
the essence of the origin
And at the end of the show
they are never happy

Monday, June 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 18 June 2018

A clever write Rini.++10

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Geetha Jayakumar 18 June 2018

Interesting write Rini. Its just as the dramatic shows we watch on TV filled with spices. People those who don't have time to look into their own house, just taking pleasure by peeping into others life. Loved it.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 June 2018

We took a vow to write a poem everyday with repeated editing till to get utmost satisfaction! Our each poem should carry a message and we should pay attention towards readership! Very useful workshop indeed...please please read my series…useful tips are there to follow suit! Extremely useful for ordinary poets like us!

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Rini Shibu 18 June 2018

ThankS Dillip..I started reading series

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Dr Dillip K Swain 18 June 2018

Dear Rini, a very interesting topic of discussion! Always avoid reading wigged clowns they appear daily making a dull show! Recently we concluded a poetry workshop and we discussed many things on this issue! You might not have seen I have condensed the outcome and started a series! Hope you will read...very useful and informative! (Part I)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 June 2018

Mirroring a little dramatic view is really very amazing. You are very clever to express this poem humorously...10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 18 June 2018

Rini, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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