! A Wish Poem by Michael Shepherd

! A Wish

Rating: 2.8


I'd like to write - like grown-up poets do:
with similes that span the universe,
that sparkle, crackle, dazzle, woo the mind;
and touch the heart with tender, swoony verse...

I'd like to write - like grown-up poets do:
in literature that's all the better for
those soaring, parabolic parables
and paradigms, and rhymes, and metaphor...

I'd like to write - like no-one else has done:
forget the rules and precedents; let fly
to heights undreamt of yet, new mindscape won..

And yet, perhaps, the world's served better by

small lamps of words amidst the cold night winds
of chance and change; cupped in a poet's hands.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tom J. Mariani 01 November 2007

Speaking of hands. I'll hand it to you. Another great poem lighting up my day.

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Luis Gil 05 May 2007

Serving the world with some truth, however small it may be...... That sounds like a mighty wish to me....... Thanks for the poem.

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Aisha Sherazi 07 May 2006

I don't need to tell you, you do write poetry like a grown up, but make me feel highly inadequate in the process! Drat! Wish I had not read this now, or voted a ten! I take it all back! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Peace, Aisha

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Nagamuthu Osho 07 August 2005

Hail! Poet, It is an eternal lilt, Which I felt and melt; O Those sweet words, which provoke, pours love and wisdom. God Bless you. Yours faithfully, N.Karthikeyan Osho

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Max Reif 20 June 2005

First poem of yours I've read. I think of you as a kind of guardian angel for this site...your comments and your poems are so prolific. But I've 'had promises to keep' and haven't oft gotten to these pages to read. I find this poem lovely, the sentiment is fine, and it works well and is quite nicely expressed in the sonnet form you chose.

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Ruth Walters 26 April 2023

loved this poem as I like to write as no-one else has written, originality my ambition.

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Chinedu Dike 13 October 2021

A brilliant work of art, well conceived and elegantly brought forth...

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Aisha Masha 16 December 2016

This is a well written unique poem on love! I will continue reading your good work.

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POET! ! ! ! ! ! Always connect with your inner child-that's where the spirit comes from-I'm sure I studied this poem when I was in high school.A ten from me.

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Fay Slimm 21 August 2008

Your wish has come true for you already write as grown-up poets do, cascading, as you do, lots of small lamps, and in cupped hands too. Bless you. Fay

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Michael Shepherd

Michael Shepherd

Marton, Lancashire
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