Young Church

Freshman - 758 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

A World War 3 - Poem by Young Church

Presidents against their own people
Leaders against their own people
They have deserted their own people
On their own the forgotten people
Famine to launch attack on people
While Presidents enjoy works of people
God hears the cry of His people

Let me know one President who gives
Credit to God
Let me know one President who stresses
The works of God
Let me know one President who would
Take AK47 to a war
I know God will win the war

We are on a world war against Almighty
For crowning wickedness
On a world war for bombing His commands
Rebelling against His will
He strikes back sheperds nations scatter
Chaotic nations in fear
Nature ordered to take part in the war

Surrender to the Almighty God you Presidents
Of the worlds.


***The Book of End of Times


Comments about A World War 3 by Young Church

  • Jacqui Broad (10/28/2011 11:02:00 AM)


    Skillfully written. Our leaders just care about their own wallets... But, the Almighty's giving them enough rope to hang themselves.
    And we, who are suffering will be the ones to enjoy the victory... Great poem.
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  • (7/28/2011 3:04:00 AM)


    This poem contains a really strong message, I'd rather say essential...Once we turn back to God, everything's gonna be alright.If not, we all know where we'll be...Amazing write... (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2011 3:20:00 AM)


    It is a marvelous poem written with great skill. Highly rich in imagery and style. I liked it very much.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'Horizon Lost' please type the name of the poem in the search box and search the poem.
    Warmest regards
    Za Thinley Gytso
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  • Leo Victor Briones (5/14/2011 2:45:00 PM)


    The sentiment of this poem is rooted in profound reality. So the subject matter is superior. I also like the structure if the poem and it's voice. My only fundamental criticism would be that the poem needs more specific examples of both how governments betray their own people and in doing so betray God's will. (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2011 6:10:00 PM)


    Put together very well - some thoughts to think about expressed in a simple yet effective manner (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 26, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 6, 2011


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