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A Wronged Faith

Rating: 5.0

Stricken by torrential tsunami
Life has become devastated
Hope broken, wasted, and died
Devoid of ember, turning to ash.

Existence is finite, it goes
Such destiny is inevitable
Caught as victim of pain
Hurt, beaten to pieces.

Sought God's providence
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Gieske 28 December 2007

I agree with the truth that you portray. Well said.

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Duncan Wyllie 20 December 2007

You pull at the heart here Marvin, it is so well composed, honesty written with such raw emotion, and then the wisdom of it all, quite stunning to say the very least Love duncan X

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Raveendran . 13 December 2007

You pen despair, desolation, the role of destiny and providence and then with carefully chosen words deplore opportunism and hedonism- nice job.

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Meggie Gultiano 12 December 2007

A very strong message you've put in here, Friendship..And i say amen to this..others only neef Him in time of emergencies..well, thanks for this message..

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Atsiylah Garfinkel 11 December 2007

Very well written. I like it.

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