About To Die Poem by Kim Barney

Kim Barney

Kim Barney

I was born in a bank - - my mother went there and made a deposit

About To Die

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You're a yellow-bellied marmot
peacefully eating in the meadow
when suddenly you are startled

by the presence of a hungry
carnivore and you realize
that you will not survive.

My brothers and everyone
else in my small town and
county used to call you and

your family "rock chucks".
We didn't learn until years
later that your official name

was "yellow-bellied marmot".
I still like "rock chuck" better.
I could call you "Rock" for short

or I could call you "Chuck",
but I can't imagine anyone would
like to be called "Yellow-Bellied".

Anyway, I hate to ramble on; I
know you're rather busy right
now, but I have a question to ask.

That creature that's about to make
you his supper, the source where
I got the picture says he is a fox,

but he looks more like a coyote
to me. If you have time to decide,
please tell me: which one is it?

About To Die
Friday, April 24, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: animals
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
written 24 April 2020
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Spock The Vegan 24 April 2020

That might be what ate 2 rabbits in my yard and left the guts. Yuk! The 7 circling buzzards came a day too early and missed them.

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Kim Barney 25 April 2020

Thanks for the comment, Spock. Sorry about the guts. So what do you think? Fox or coyote?

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Douglas Scotney 24 April 2020

I think we need to see its tail.

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Kim Barney 25 April 2020

Doug, thanks for commenting. The tail probably would be a real giveaway, wouldn't it?

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Bri Edwards 12 August 2022

Kim, how foolish of US to have not thought of a Tibetan Sand Fox, as you state in a comment belwo. : ) Except in zoos, I think I've only seen the 'American' Red Fox and Gray Fox. : )

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Bri Edwards 12 August 2022

Damn, it looks like a coyote, not fox, to me as well, Kim. I 'hate' when I search online for an image and not all photos are what they are supposed to be. Hmph.

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Unica Hija 24 May 2020

This is final dear poet Kim Barney...haha..

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Kim Barney 28 April 2020

Attention, Everyone! I received a private e-mail from a distinguished veterinarian who says it is indeed a fox, but not one that is found in North America. This is a Tibetan Sand Fox, and this picture won awards for the photographer. You can find the story on the Internet.

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Joyce Barnson 27 April 2020

I think it is a coyote, but what do I know?

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Kim Barney 27 April 2020

I think you know the difference between a fox and a coyote! Thanks for commenting!

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