Absence Poem by Rini Shibu

Absence

Rating: 5.0


When feelings are not valued
you get hurt and
When you are ignored
It cause deep heartaches
Irrespective of their flaws
if you value and respect them
from the depth of your heart
It's a message that
still you love them
And thus you can make this earth
a paradise by doing sweet things
And that is love from your heart
Which will be realised
Atleast in your absence

Wednesday, May 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 23 May 2018

Rini, your poem makes sense of faliure.++10

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Lamar Cole 23 May 2018

Great poem about feelings.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 August 2022

Yes, we feel the absence of an innocent poetess... beautiful expression. I liked this poem. Top score.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 13 August 2018

And thus you can make this earth a paradise by doing sweet things And that is love from your heart Which will be realised Atleast in your absence.........so touching and true. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 June 2018

Very true said, your absence should also be felt, thereby doing sweet things. Thought provoking write. Loved it.

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Nudershada Cabanes 26 May 2018

Everything we do in life will be highlighted in our absence both good and bad.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 May 2018

A piece of work emanated from the recess of heart of the poetess! Thanks for sharing!

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