When feelings are not valued
you get hurt and
When you are ignored
It cause deep heartaches
Irrespective of their flaws
if you value and respect them
from the depth of your heart
It's a message that
still you love them
And thus you can make this earth
a paradise by doing sweet things
And that is love from your heart
Which will be realised
Atleast in your absence
Yes, we feel the absence of an innocent poetess... beautiful expression. I liked this poem. Top score.
And thus you can make this earth a paradise by doing sweet things And that is love from your heart Which will be realised Atleast in your absence.........so touching and true. A beautiful poem shared amazingly.10
Very true said, your absence should also be felt, thereby doing sweet things. Thought provoking write. Loved it.
Everything we do in life will be highlighted in our absence both good and bad.10
A piece of work emanated from the recess of heart of the poetess! Thanks for sharing!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rini, your poem makes sense of faliure.++10