Too abstract is LOVE!
Yet it lives-
In slow songs.
Ripples down;
every stride every step.
Can be found;
On crushed leaves;
Of the grass
Can be found in
Leftovers of chocolate malt.
I see it in you.
And it smiles back,
Flushed, un-scalded,
And perfect.
On crushed leaves; Of the grass Can be found in Leftovers of chocolate malt... i see it in you. love, love, fineness of love. tony
Love complements a life of togetherness through mutual respect and selfless sacrifice. Thanks.
" Too abstract and perfect" . Congratulations
Wow! This is a perfect love-song! Is it abstract? Or says clearly - " I see it in You" . Congratulations on this poem being chosen! Well-deserved!
Every stride! ! Every step! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Well expressed thoughts and feelings. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing, Tribhuvan.
A sweet poem. Short and to the point about love. 'Leftovers of chocolate malt. I see it in you. And it smiles back, Flushed, un-scalded, And perfect.'... is so nice. Loved it. Congrats.