Abstracted (Haiku) Poem by Mihaela Pirjol

Abstracted (Haiku)

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these present moments
shall not create memories—
I'm reminiscing

Friday, January 20, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: memory,present
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Terry Craddock 26 January 2017

Patterned Dreamcoat Garments Of Our Lives special memorable moments or moments of pleasant contrasts shape future moments of memory esteemed; in our reminiscing are regenerating seeds comfortable interwoven Harvest experiences lived experienced textile images ties knotted; into patterned dreamcoat garments of our lives we weave chosen fabric designing choices glittering memories past errors redemned; Copyright © Terence George Craddock Inspired by the poem Abstracted (Senryu) by the poet Mihaela Pirjol. Dedicated to the poet Mihaela Pirjol.

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Terry Craddock 20 January 2017

yes special memorable moments, or moments of pleasant contrasts, shape future moments of memory esteemed; yet in reminiscing are regenerating seeds, comfortable interwoven experiences, textile image ties knotted, into patterned dreamcoat garments of our lives.

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