Accept This Tagar (A Small White Flower) Poem by Bhaswat Chakraborty

Accept This Tagar (A Small White Flower)

Rating: 4.8


Accept this tagar now
That’s all I can offer at this moment
Limbs of my expression are not elaborate now
Just a little flame
Of my wish to give you something
If you accept, I can rest

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sherri Coulter 18 September 2009

...alas first flower offered not accepted....only after pain and heartache captured, would my small white flower accept my Tagar given 10/10

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Philosophy of a DewyFlower 12 September 2009

not only pen express feeling but Tagar too/ simple and beautiful verses/

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Jacqui Thewless 12 September 2009

Very nice. Could be even better, though, without the fifth line - in which case it would be perfect!

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Ben Gieske 18 July 2009

Nice and short. I am not familiar with this flower. I will look it up.

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Vidi Writes 15 June 2009

'If you accept, i can rest.' So touching, dear poet. All of us, have in life Such a wish Without which end doesn't make sense. I accept this poem A cute little wonder. Thank you.

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