Accept this tagar now
That’s all I can offer at this moment
Limbs of my expression are not elaborate now
Just a little flame
Of my wish to give you something
If you accept, I can rest
not only pen express feeling but Tagar too/ simple and beautiful verses/
Very nice. Could be even better, though, without the fifth line - in which case it would be perfect!
Nice and short. I am not familiar with this flower. I will look it up.
'If you accept, i can rest.' So touching, dear poet. All of us, have in life Such a wish Without which end doesn't make sense. I accept this poem A cute little wonder. Thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
...alas first flower offered not accepted....only after pain and heartache captured, would my small white flower accept my Tagar given 10/10