Acting Poem by Arielle Friese

Acting

Rating: 4.9


You want me to act
like we've never kissed
you want to forget
pretend we never meet
and i've tried
and i've tried but i haven't yet...
you walk by and i fall to pieces

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Broken Soul 14 October 2011

thats good. its what ppl are thinking after a breakup. im sorry your going through that. you must love the guy

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Chidori Storm 21 December 2011

This guy definitely lost someone special, because I keep wanting to read all of you poems all over again. These all come straight from the heart, this one especially. It is very special. Don't give up writing poems.

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Jack Price 10 November 2011

cute poem. thanks for the invite. J. L.

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Amber S 21 October 2011

great poem. ive had this happen to me too. -Amber

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Ace Of Black Hearts 17 October 2011

Sometimes we must endure the loss of the ones we love. The reason can be simple or complicated. They can sometimes make us feel so jaded. But keep your chin up. And maybe the next one will truly be the right one. Great and powerful yet simple poem. And usually it is the thoughts of those who just recently had a break up.

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Romeo Della Valle 16 October 2011

Short, sad and powerful! This amazing write shows clearly that you have great feelings and talent! Keep it up! Tomorrow will be another day! 10+++ God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ...

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