Addict Poem by sílvia oliveira


Rating: 5.0

Have become
Kind of addicted
To your caress
Cased in words
& attractive poems

Type of a good
Catching ill
- You -
Lodged in my core
& inner body home
With a view to be cured

James B. Earley 24 February 2008

How poignant that word addiction! Beautifully expressed. Thank you.

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 February 2008

As when encored upon by the tunes of words love when addicted by marijuana.. ..yet lusciuos, beautiful write, i do admire,10+, thanks for sharing

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I like the casual tone of this, the feeling that, 'Hey, I'm realizing how important you are to me, and you know what, I like it, I crave it.' This poem has a nice feel.

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Ronald Stroman 24 January 2008

your poem looks good.............................

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John Tiong Chunghoo 12 June 2008

dear silvia i love the rawness and spontaneity of your poem. wonder who this lucky poet is? keep on.

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David Desantis 01 May 2008 are very talented...this is the first i've read of yours, but I will definately read more...addicted to love it huh, and hopefully rhyming too... -david

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~ Jon London ~ 29 April 2008

Outstanding, the words flow through this write with poetic brilliance all the very best J.L

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 March 2008

I love the way you write. You don't waste any words. You must be a great teacher! GW62

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 02 March 2008

somtimes we're addicted to something.......

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sílvia oliveira

sílvia oliveira

piracicaba, sp - brasil
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