Adieu Poem by Shabeeh Haider


Rating: 4.9

I'll hold you for a final kiss,
Its time to say goodbye.
And I don't know if ever we
Will meet before I die.
Miles of ocean and of Land,
Can't keep us far apart,
But my dear, I cannot break
The chains that bind my heart.
Your lovely face is in my eyes,
I know you are not far.
I cannot touch, but see each night
The far off evening star.
Your eyes, your lips, your every form,
Is still fresh in my mind.
You are with me, though I know well
I've left you far behind.
My arms yet yearn to hold you close,
My lips are hungry still.
My eyes have seen your charms but yet
They haven't had their fill.
Each time you think of me, just pray,
Let tears not come to eye....
And I promise you my dear
We'll meet before I die.

Tuesday, October 28, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love and pain
Magdalena Biela 29 October 2014

The one who writes a poem that has a perfect prosody, a subtle message, harmony of vowels, rhythm, music, this is a real Poet! To add line after line and call it a poem, this I do not admire...I need to feel the thrill of rhyming poetry, the one true lost Art. Thank you for such beautifully written poem and I wish you good luck! Maddalena

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Gajanan Mishra 29 October 2014

No separation in union, and we are united, fine love.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 30 October 2014

Poem as a whole lovely and concluded fantastically with great hope - Each time you think of me, just pray, Let tears not come to eye....And I promise you my dear We'll meet before I die. what can be more if this is the flame within thank you Shabeeh :) I opt for max rating

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Chinedu Dike 10 July 2018

Well conceived and elegantly crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with artistic brilliance. A lovely creation from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Istabraq Al Ahmadi 22 June 2016

The stately moving lyricality and the deeply felt feelings of this poem are stunning! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Shabeeh Haider 22 June 2016

thank you Istabraq

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Valentin Savin 18 January 2016

Very well written, though pensive. It sounds nice and promising. I like it, your rhythm and rhyming is nice. Good luck and keep writing.

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Shabeeh Haider 30 January 2016

Valentin, thank you so much

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Akhtar Jawad 09 November 2014

The fragrance of emotions and colors of love have made this poem a touching beauty..........10

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Elizabeth Padillo Olesen 08 November 2014

What a poem of great romance. Young people will surely love this.

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