Adoring Mirror Poem by Uriah Hamilton

Adoring Mirror

Rating: 5.0


The paintings in the art gallery
Remain the same
And continue to reflect
The eternal beauty
As inspiring today
As when I saw them as a child.

The ways of mirrors are not as true:
In the past a lover brushed her hair
Into the soft gaze of an adoring mirror
That seemed to love her
As much as I did,
But now the lover is gone
And only loneliness is reflected
In the same cold and unsympathetic mirror.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LOVEFOOL Aka 29 May 2008

Strong words with deep feeling a fine piece of work Thanks Nik

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Michael Fischer 29 May 2008

Great piece...memorable ending! -Michael

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Tailor Bell 29 May 2008

a stark reality, Uriah, and a fine write. -Tailor

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Bri Edwards 14 July 2018

i like it...a lot and just sent 3 comments, but they don't seem to have registered anywhere yet on PH. : ( bri ;) to MyPoemList

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bri edwards 14 July 2018

(cont.) ... (thanks, Google) : define more so Though more so spelled as two words, the one-word moreso gained ground despite the disapproval of usage authorities. More so strictly means that to a greater degree, and so refers to an adjective or adverb used earlier. bri ;) to MyPoemList

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bri edwards 14 July 2018

(cont.) .. favorite lines: Into the soft gaze of an adoring mirror That seemed to love her As much as I did & , .. only loneliness is reflected In the same cold and unsympathetic mirror. (cont.)

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bri edwards 14 July 2018

PH moved me to this page while i was away from PC. i'm glad it did. just a wild guess: (two guesses in fact) 1- you are as old as i am or more so ** [see additional comments] & 2- this poem is really about you and a lover (wife?) and she died or 'went away' some other way. (cont.)

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Joseph Daly 30 May 2008

A wonderful use of language in this Uriah. This is a beautiful, relective piece and the use of mirror and picture as metaphor is put to great use here.

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