Advice, Before It's Too Late Poem by Daniel Brick
Advice, Before It's Too Late
Go as far as you can.
Stop listening to that
foreign voice within.
It cannot help you
as it did then when
the words chosen were
soothing, and again
and again made you turn
away from anger, withdraw
into quietude, a kind of sleep
for your troubled senses.
To be right, to be righteous
is to be alone when you most
need companionship. Look there!
The thread you need is entangled
in the willow tree. Free it: it is
the thread of Homecoming, taut
like an arrow ready to fly
to the target's center. The word
lodged in my head offers soothing.
It has reached me like the ancient
gift of Victory. You have gone
far enough. It's time to rest.
A well composed poem. Truly magnificent...5 stars+++
A very profound look inside of yourself. Need tofind a soothing point there without any disturbance from outside, introverted.
lodged in my head offers soothing. It has reached me like the ancient gift of Victory. You have gone far enough. It's time to rest.
away from anger, withdraw into quietude, a kind of sleep for your troubled senses. To be right, to be righteous is to be alone when you most need companionship
It began on the inspiring note and ended with the confusion in the mind as to whether the journey is worthwhile to continue or to stop to take rest and think about the other course of life. Introspection is must at every stage and after every expedition. A thoughtful poem from your pen.10****
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'withdraw into quietude, a kind of sleep for your troubled senses. To be right, to be righteous is to be alone when you most need companionship.' - Loved these lines!