Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

After Death What? - Poem by Subbaraman N V

After Death what? None knows sure on earth
Fear and pain, Death brings to all in mirth
All earned out of tears of others
Journeys never with the Death with feathers!

Then why dishonesty and villainy
In earning wealth that comes not certainly
Be honest and be truthful while earning
Help all in making a happy living!

Sinners prosper never in the long run
Others glitter ever like a strong Sun!
Mother Nature never discreminates
Even the bad, Mother Earth tolerates

Man to learn a lot from Mother Nature
And follow her laws for brighter future!


Comments about After Death What? by Subbaraman N V

  • Gita Ashok (6/9/2010 11:33:00 AM)


    Then why dishonesty and villainy
    In earning wealth that comes not certainly
    Be honest and be truthful while earning
    Help all in making a happy living!

    Very well written and how true it is - not just here but all over the world.
    (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/10/2009 7:17:00 AM)


    Man to learn a lot from Mother Nature
    And follow her laws for brighter future......................eventhought it may bejust an imagination about anotehr world, but we firmly believe that only good is accompanied with us.. it reminds us always of our deeds/misdeeds.. well versed in words and i fully subscribe to the views and liked it most.....10

    red mine visiting hell.....humble submission.. o.lord..prayer..i m disgrace..just referencess
    (Report) Reply

  • Ashraful Musaddeq (4/21/2009 6:20:00 AM)


    Very nice poem (Report) Reply

  • (3/20/2009 2:43:00 AM)


    Even though who doesn't believe in God must read about 'Pascal Gamble' and do good works and pray to the God...........If there is existence of the God he will appreciate our work if he doensnt exist we dont loss anything because we are not going to take anything with us after death.............
    Good Write......10+++
    (Report) Reply

  • Vidi Writes (1/11/2009 6:09:00 AM)


    We studied all through our life
    Big degrees kept in front
    Still trying to acquire more of that sort...!
    If asked a simple question...
    Whats this life all about? ?
    Many have blinked and gone.
    May be this question is one added to that
    After Death What?
    A few can think within and think beyond.

    Happy for that rarity.
    God Subject.
    (Report) Reply

  • Sathyanarayana M V S (9/2/2008 6:36:00 AM)


    Very good message but some more could have been written on death before leading to other issues. However, this is a very good poem...9 (Report) Reply

  • (7/13/2008 12:32:00 AM)


    you have shared a lot about life without malice by flipping the same coin of death. thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (7/9/2008 5:23:00 AM)


    the last 2 lines are an eyeopener
    great poem
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2008 4:43:00 AM)


    Man to learn a lot from Mother Nature
    And follow her laws for brighter future......
    This is a thought rendering write.. a very fine work
    10+
    Rema
    (Report) Reply

  • (7/3/2008 3:56:00 AM)


    I liked this. Keep writing. (Report) Reply

Read all 10 comments »



Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?



Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 3, 2008



Famous Poems

  1. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  4. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  5. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  6. Stopping By Woods On A Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  7. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  8. I Do Not Love You Except Because I Love You
    Pablo Neruda
  9. Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep
    Mary Elizabeth Frye
  10. Television
    Roald Dahl
[Report Error]