An Elegy Poem by Subbaraman N V

Great work here Subbaraman i do like this a lot so much thought has gone into it Well done

Very well done, the deep feelings for the departed come through strongly throughout this piece. Excellent and moving, I enjoyed this one.

very imaginative subbaraman. so many words for such a common thing we could hardly thought of for a poem. great write. keep on.

dear subbaram.. I do feel the most pulsating moments in LIFE...comes in with a LOSS... realisations...recollections...are more meaningful...when...u' feel a 'sense of LOSS.. u'...have painted.. simple philosophies of LIFE'.. regards... sivan..

This poem is such, as if it were my emoton!

A true loyalty and adoration conveyed through the poem.

You had me going through the whole beginning, writing of your loss, thinking that you were speaking of a loved one, then you spring it on us - you were talking about a purse! ! Hilarious and very witty - great imagination! ! A very good poem, thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

This elegy is full of suspense - I kept guessing until I reached the line with LOST PURSE. What clever planning has gone into it! Simply wonderful! A 10+++

You were thick and you were thin You saw me in my thick and thin! You were fed once a month You fed me all through the month! These lines display wise poetic humor...a humorous lament on a lost wallet 10

I was musing over...what was that? very nicely dealt with the suspense. Yes! Even I too feel that way about my purse.9