Afterlife ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Afterlife ~

Rating: 5.0


fallen rose petals,
no more carry the fragrance,
bees made them honey.

Friday, April 2, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: afterlife,transformation,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetic Sky 07 April 2021

Yes moments are to be captured and preserved.

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Rebecca Navarre 03 April 2021

Wow! .. Such profound thoughts! .. Deeply beautiful and so heart moving! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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S H 03 April 2021

Trail remains in one or the other form.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 02 April 2021

Symbiosis. Nature at its best until a pesky human breaks the cycle

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Dr Dillip K Swain 02 April 2021

The first line finds its essence in the last line though fallen petals have lost fragrance. A wonderful philosophocal write in its absolute brevity. Top score!

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